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Life On A Moonstone

Life right here is so predictable.
My heart's so tired, so cold;
I had to go and be the only fool.
My heart, it once stood out so bold.
Being here is oh-so similar every day;
Things had better pick up soon,
Or else my new heart may stray.
I wish I could fly now - to the moon.

Right here, it's always filled with sadness
And I don't think that we can change that.
This world, it's always filled with madness,
I don't think that's something we can work at.
Life on a moonstone,
A place to call my own.

I am finding this so awkward.
I just wish I could stay amongst the fields
As being here makes my heart feel as it should,
Because here I can use the hills as shields.
Being here is oh-so similar every day;
Always playing that same old tune,
So let the song change now, I say!
I wish I could fly now - to the moon.

Right here, it's always filled with sadness
And I don't think that we can change that.
This world, it's always filled with madness,
I don't think that's something we can work at.
Life on a moonstone,
A place to call my own.
Life on a moonstone,
A place to call our own.
EDIT 20th Sept. 2011: Even when this was uploaded this was a few years old, and I likely regard this as one of my worst, yet earliest, pieces. Makes me think that I've probably reasonably improved since this though and the subject does mean something to me somewhat; it was pretty ambigious and a lot of the lines are non-sensical and random except for the 'Moonstone.' Moonstone is what myself and my friends affectionately call a big rock (and its surrounding area) that's at the top of the large hill in my town. It was a central hang-out spot for my Saturday 'weekend group', and thusly holds some really precious memories for me, even more-so since this was uploaded.

Please keep in mind this is old work, and if you look at the comments keep the same thing in mind. This was my early teens and I'm not that lame now, bro.
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
8. I don't think this is one of your worst poems. Honestly, I think it's one of your best :) Everyone can relate to the words in this poem. And you know why? It's because life gets a little bit hectic and deep down inside you feel trapped and you feel as if you don't belong anywhere. We all want our own moonstone. :)
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looking-for-hope Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
Lovely work, my friend =]

<33
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Toadsanime Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, why thank you, 'tis very kind of you! =D :hug:
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looking-for-hope Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
You're very much welcome =] :hug:
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Toadsanime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the fav, too! ^_^
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looking-for-hope Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
yw =]
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SamayoSukuichi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
D: Dude ... don't reawaken the part of me that use to write poems (with your painfully obvious good ones).
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Toadsanime Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thanks for the compliments. I still feel as if this is kinda' lame and could be much better.

And lol, you should re-awaken that poem-writing mood if you wish to. =D
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Saiyuri-chan66 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009
Beautiful poem! Great work! ((Btw, HOWWWL!!! XD IMMA WEREWOLF))
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Toadsanime Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks for the kind comment! ^.^
(RAWR.)
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